thats a lot of words to fit on a t shirt though!
are they embroidered in or printed on?
I'd look for something that was simple and could be read and seen from afar
It is a lot of words, but there are ways to incorporate the scripture into the design like I did here:

Again, I am not recommending this for you, nor is this some sort of shameless plug for one of my t-shirt designs.
As I've said before, I just dress in a manner which hopefully brings glory to God and which hopefully generates conversations about the Lord (that has happened many times) or at least plants a seed in someone's mind.
People do read my shirts, hoodies, and ballcaps all of the time, and many of them comment on them.
Years back, I worked in my friend's pizzeria back in New Jersey. His pizzeria was situated right across the street from the public high school and a Roman Catholic high school. Many students from both schools came into the pizzeria daily, and I probably had about 100 different Christian t-shirts back then, too (this was many years ago, and I no longer have any of those specific designs).
Anyhow, one of the students at one of the schools was my friend's daughter, and she told me that my t-shirts were the talk of the school. Granted, it was probably more in a mocking manner, but I did get to share the gospel with some students, give a Bible to one student, give tracts to several students, and I also had a most interesting conversation with a Jewish male teenager concerning a prophetic passage in the book of Daniel that points to Jesus. He actually came back into the pizzeria about a week later and told me that he had a dream about what I told him.
Hey, you never know. Plant a seed, and there just might be a harvest somewhere down the line.