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[Love009]

Brenna and croton those are beautiful!!

 

[BellaFlor]

[FONT=&quot] I WROTE YOUR NAME[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]I wrote your name on a piece of paper,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]but by accident threw it away.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I wrote your name on my hand,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]but it washed away.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I wrote your name in the sand,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]but the waves whispered it away.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I wrote your[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]name in my heart,[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]and forever it will stay.[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]I believe in angels, the kind that heaven sends.[/FONT]

[FONT=&quot]I'm surrounded by angels, but I call them my best[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot]friends!![/FONT]

I liked the way this poem was written, very nice.

 

[BellaFlor]

My last tear
I have shed my last tear,
Now taking in all that you'll give me.
Tonight so greatly did your grace appear,
I found it the only thing that could be so dear.
And though I am so weak and weary,
I have shed my last tear.

It is so hard to believe that finally I have broken free;
enveloped in Your light so clear.
Now taking in all that you'll give me.

I knelt before the altar,
Giving away what all I use to be.
After weeping and pouring out, I know now that I have shed my last tear.

"Send me to the nations oh God" I cried to He,
Because I knew my prayer He would hear.
"Oh God, I will take all that you will give me"

Though I know that day is drawing near,
I have truly shed my last tear.

That's sure a powerful poem prayer.

 

[BellaFlor]

My past calls my name,
It jeers and said I am to blame
Its cruel fingers know no mercy,
My heart sinks in a wretched flame.

I know it calls were true,
Through life’s choices I blindly flew
With not much thought to their end,
My tears now mingle with the fresh dew.

I look to the ground,
Thinking of the new despair I had found,
With surprise I saw a puddle of blood,
It was not mine so I looked around.

I looked up and saw a cross,
And Man who was tattered with dross
He explained that He had taken my shame,
And that Saten was no longer my boss.

“You are now a new creature,
Although you have some old features,
I will give you a new name,
Now go into the world and be a teacher”.

He wiped the tears from my face,
He told me to go to every place,
And tell them what He did,
So I want to tell you of His grace.

See He died to take away your sin,
He died in order that we may be let in,
Let into Heaven where He lives,
No matter where you have been.

Beautiful written

 

[ness]

okay i got my heart broken bad my my friend when after we told each other we loved each other he moved and we got into a fight but all my poem i puyt on are about him i miss him


"It Hurts To Know"
I know your gone
it hurts to know that,was the end
It hurts to know
Our last word were not
"ill miss you Or I love you" they were
just hurtful good byes
It hurts to know I wont see that Sweet
Smile or hear that funny
laugh It hurts to know how much I cared
And how fast it all
Ended.




also this one


you made me laugh,think twice ,regret, and live 2 my fullest that is my definition of love some people say i cant love but unless you have met someone who makes you laugh is man enought 2 aploiguez can say he loves you, can do something so stupid u love him even more, and treats u speicle and ever after you may loose him you start 2 cry and think about your last dumm fight and when he said " love you" than u will now if u have loved been in or fell so hard 4 someone that u were-is-or-was in love and will always say or think i miss you, and i love you 4 ever

 

[amber_jenett]

sadly no but my friend is an amazing poet : )

 

[Follower16]

ok, this is one i wrote a few years ago and kinda touched it up recently (btw, dont ask me y but the tune of "brick in the wall" popped in my head while writing)

Revelation

Here comes Satan between the trees.
You're so weak that you're on your knees.
He's drawing you closer, you're losing your breath.
Seeing him clearly, you're feeling his wrath.
He's promising you life but you know he's wrong.
With Jesus Christ is where your soul belongs.
His Holy Word will give Satan fits.
He wants to draw you closer to the firey pits.
Now a holy war, Satan wants to win.
Jesus will prevail, we are all his kin.
God's Thousand-year reight, time for Earth to heal.
Because the Lamb appeared and broke all seven seals.
Christian souls come back, martyrs all return.
No more souls are bad, no more souls will burn.

P.S. please tell me what you think about it

 

[Follower16]

here's another one, even tho its not as...uplifting, i was feeling bad

Painfulness

If only somebody cared,
if only i could feel like i've been loved.
And if only for once,
my poor heart could be touched.
My heart was once filled with anxiousness.
I found i was all wrong and it's filled with painfullness.
I thought the pain of it might kill me,
but things kept gettin worse around me.
My grades dropped from A's to C's,
i never could get any sleep.
Im just not who i used to be,
just 'cause my heart hurts painfully.

P.S. this was b4 i returned to Christ

 

[BellaFlor]

Follower16, I think the first poem is very powerful, and it speaks strongly out about the truth.
Satan is like a roaring lion looking for a someone to devour, and once he has got his claws on you, it is more difficult to get free.
Though when standing all firm in Christ, we will win over him more and more.

The second poem is also very well written, it is sure also very sad.
But yeah, that's how many teenagers can feel at times too, I think.
Getting C's aren't so bad though. But yeah, if you are used to getting lots of A's and B's then I might understand it has to be a really bad feeling.

 

[Love009]

I can see it in your eyes

Don't try and hide what is so clear

I said I'd always be there

And its true, but you've got to trust me now and tell me whats inside

If you don't let it out it will all crumble down

Its happened before but its worse this time

Don't you know I'd give you the world, I'd give anything not to see you cry

I hurt when you hurt, I cry when you cry

So this one last time, don't keep it all inside

 

[SoLoved]

I did feel rather lonely;

As if something was missing today.

I do not know to explain, but it felt as if there was an empty space.

I tried to avoid you;

In fact, I must admit that’s what I did.

Yet everything seemed to turn out, in ways that made us go still further apart.

I guess that it’s just destiny because we are not meant to be,

Yet I just want to be your friend so that you can smile at me!

It was then I had a revelation,

It was your smile that I truly missed.

It’s not that I ever liked you,

It’s just your smile that brings me true bliss.

Thank you for your smile and the twinkle in your eyes.

I hope that you will stay my friend, because I will surely try.

I apologize.

 

[SoLoved]

It is a rhetorical question,

That contains one of the most cliché words known to man.

But, what is love?

Some say that it is held in fate or destiny,

Others claim that love just slides by and you have to grasp it.


Love, the word seems so mild;

So pretty, delicate to the ear.

Its true meaning is just unclear.

One might not know what it is,

Yet they want it,

I want it.


Companionship, friendship, affection,

Intimacy, bliss, perfection,

The words can go on and on.

Yet, it does not answer the question.

I want to know,

I beg You tell me.

What is love?


It's Your face.

Dear God, Your Everything is Love.

 

[Prodigal_Boi]

Praying that we overcome with the cynicism in a world gone mad. To see a government who banned prayer out of schools, as we prayed to a God they had all but try to erase from our heads. To see a world where youths are being polluted by sex,drugs,and carnal views, and the minds of our young women and men are being destroy by object-oriented and the bourgeois and sublunary things of the world. We live in a world were women have dissipated motherhood, and turn to neglect ion and abuse, causing physical,mental,emotional,and spiritual scars that suppress and pierce through the sensuality of a angelic and innocent Childs soul. To see our men’s live among each other in segrgation,denigration,and no education,causeing their family to be humiliated,devasted,and irrated.As we aggonize,constrain,aggrieve,and bewail to find out that of 25,488 homicide cases this yr, 20,115 are mens,being kill due to drugs,gangs,violence,and bestiality. We live in a world were politics are of full of duplicity,deception,and defraud, and serve a government that restrain,retain,and detain the truth that gives understanding and apprehension of the things going on in our society and alliance with political issues. We live in a world were blacks and whites are still looked at as colors and not humans, and judge by the pigment and tincture of their skin instead of the distinctiveness and uniqueness of them being individuals from vast and astronomical cultures and lifestyles. When will we overcome this world, when will assumptions,pressumptions,and conception of this world no longer dicate,govern,or edict who we are and what we are, and the mistakes and inadvertence of our parents,teachers,and leaders have no affect in our lives. Well today America God calls us to a higher standard and fundamental of living, he has called you to a royal and dignified way of living. He has Chosen you be a holy nation that’s acceptable and relevant in the eyes of the Lord. Today is the day when we will be called overcomer and not becomers,today is the day we will be called victorious and not victims, today is the day that we will be called leaders and not followers. Today is that day, that all will stand up and say I HAVE OVERCOME THIS WORLD

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[Love009]

I did feel rather lonely;

As if something was missing today.

I do not know to explain, but it felt as if there was an empty space.

I tried to avoid you;

In fact, I must admit that’s what I did.

Yet everything seemed to turn out, in ways that made us go still further apart.

I guess that it’s just destiny because we are not meant to be,

Yet I just want to be your friend so that you can smile at me!

It was then I had a revelation,

It was your smile that I truly missed.

It’s not that I ever liked you,

It’s just your smile that brings me true bliss.

Thank you for your smile and the twinkle in your eyes.

I hope that you will stay my friend, because I will surely try.

I apologize.

I can't dismiss you

I can't ignore you

My human flesh wants to stay mad but I know I won't be able to

The longing inside of my soul that tugs and pulls at me to forgive won't go away

God gave us forgiveness only so we can forgive and forget

So therefore that is what I must do forgive and forget

Yes it might have taken a little longer than it should but I wanted to mean it

So you should know you are forgiven but that doesn't mean I don't have the apprehensive feeling

The feeling that possibly you could be lying

The feeling of mistrust or false faith in something not so stable

Yes I love you, Yes I forgive you, but I don't trust you

Harsh maybe, Honest yes

 

[SoLoved]

I can't dismiss you

I can't ignore you

My human flesh wants to stay mad but I know I won't be able to

The longing inside of my soul that tugs and pulls at me to forgive won't go away

God gave us forgiveness only so we can forgive and forget

So therefore that is what I must do forgive and forget

Yes it might have taken a little longer than it should but I wanted to mean it

So you should know you are forgiven but that doesn't mean I don't have the apprehensive feeling

The feeling that possibly you could be lying

The feeling of mistrust or false faith in something not so stable

Yes I love you, Yes I forgive you, but I don't trust you

Harsh maybe, Honest yes

I cannot avoid you

I cannot bring myself to try

I cannot get your words, your very face to escape my thoughts and mind

My body wants these feelings to go away so that I don't have to deal with this

But my spirit and soul are pulling and drawing at me to fix this

I did not want to hurt you

Yet I think I did

You had a choice and it was something I could never decide for

You chose to forgive, when I could barely forgive myself

I admit that I have been unstable for a long time

But somehow God still loves me enough to help me me get back in control

I am not perfect and I guarantee you that I will still stumble at times

But know that when I fall I will fall forward

And God is the one catching me

I would have said sorry another way but the simple phrase just wasn't enough

I wanted you to see that I do mean it

I suppose the definition of harsh is different with everyone

When you look at the bigger picture I need this

I need your lack of trust as something to strive after to get back

Otherwise nothing is learned

Like a promise written in sand it washes away

Yes I love you, you are my friend, but I will not promise you

I cannot

I will not until I know in my heart I can keep it

 

[SoLoved]

I wrote this a couple years ago at camp...


In this cage where I’m held captive,
Can there be an opening,
A chance,
That I might set myself free
From this world,
This harsh and busy world,
Out of bondage into light,
Into everlasting hope?

Hoping to set myself free from chains,
I struggle with all of my heart,
Against stupidity and ignorance,
Against ugliness and jealousy
That are waiting,
Waiting just around the corner
To darken my days

Forever, I shall seek
To find a place
Where this cruel realm fades away,
Where painful things are unheard of,
Where only beautiful things exist,
The convent of my world.

Perhaps, the wings like eagle's,
The thrill of a wonderful note
Shall carry me
Faraway into Your heaven,
Into the dream of which I seek

 

[limegreenone]

I wrote this a couple months ago.

Staring
At my broken past
Living
A depravity that's vast

I'm feeling the weight
Of a world that doesn't last
Feeling the wait
Ending fast

Face
My heart to let You cast
Grace
In a place that's passed.

 

[FirePanther]

Interesting topic ^^ I wrote something in italian

 

[Sweetheart996]

I know this probably isn't very good but oh well, I still want to share it.

Finding Yourself in the Sunset

The light reflects as the sun sets,
something I don't want to miss.

This feeling I feel is to big for words,
It's like a romantic first kiss.

My worries and fears are all swept away,
as the sun sets to end the perfect day.

I never belong but here I do,
I can be me and you can be you!


Tell me what y'all think of it!