Write your poem :)

  • Thread starter Thread starter Love009
  • Start date Start date
  • Christian Chat is a moderated online Christian community allowing Christians around the world to fellowship with each other in real time chat via webcam, voice, and text, with the Christian Chat app. You can also start or participate in a Bible-based discussion here in the Christian Chat Forums, where members can also share with each other their own videos, pictures, or favorite Christian music.

    If you are a Christian and need encouragement and fellowship, we're here for you! If you are not a Christian but interested in knowing more about Jesus our Lord, you're also welcome! Want to know what the Bible says, and how you can apply it to your life? Join us!

    To make new Christian friends now around the world, click here to join Christian Chat.
L

Love009

Guest
[FONT=&quot] I WROTE YOUR NAME
[/FONT]
[FONT=&quot] I wrote your name on a piece of paper,
but by accident threw it away.
I wrote your name on my hand,
but it washed away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves whispered it away.
I wrote your
name in my heart,
and forever it will stay.
I believe in angels, the kind that heaven sends.

I'm surrounded by angels, but I call them my best
friends!![/FONT]






Do you have any totally awesome rhyming poems??? Share them :)
 
I actually just recently had to write a poem in English... However, I'm not into sharing deep feelings, so I had to avoid topics such as my girlfriend and parents... So I got inspiration from the rain, since it was raining outside =D

Had to be 14 lines, Shakespearian Sonnet style.
ABAB
CDCD
EFEF
GG

I don't have it atm, but I'll post it when it's passed back out to me =)
 
I haven't wrote in forever! But I don't ryhme when I do. I don't like being held in by rules and guidelines. I just like writing whatever I feel.
 
Ok than ha ha. It doesn't have to rhyme. :) but you should still do a poem!! or something really cool sounding
 
a poem....

a bird is flying way up high
trying hard to touch the sky
when he touched it he had found
he was actually touching the ground.
 
Love009 said:
Ok than ha ha. It doesn't have to rhyme. :) but you should still do a poem!! or something really cool sounding
Click to expand...
I might post something. The problem is, all of the stuff I have written is really emotional to me, so I'll see.
 
Cako53 said:
I haven't wrote in forever! But I don't ryhme when I do. I don't like being held in by rules and guidelines. I just like writing whatever I feel.
Click to expand...

Write a hyku? I forgot how to spell it lol but those don't rhyme and don't need rules, so that's perfect for yuh!
 
Some join as mental midgets,
They are the infantry.

Some join as common criminals,
They form artillery.

But of all the men who go to war,
There's none that quite compare,

To the zipperheads,
We're death on treads,
We're the mighty Armour corps!
 
My last tear
I have shed my last tear,
Now taking in all that you'll give me.
Tonight so greatly did your grace appear,
I found it the only thing that could be so dear.
And though I am so weak and weary,
I have shed my last tear.

It is so hard to believe that finally I have broken free;
enveloped in Your light so clear.
Now taking in all that you'll give me.

I knelt before the altar,
Giving away what all I use to be.
After weeping and pouring out, I know now that I have shed my last tear.

"Send me to the nations oh God" I cried to He,
Because I knew my prayer He would hear.
"Oh God, I will take all that you will give me"

Though I know that day is drawing near,
I have truly shed my last tear.
 
yoej_ogart said:
Write a hyku? I forgot how to spell it lol but those don't rhyme and don't need rules, so that's perfect for yuh!
Click to expand...
Haiku, and they do need rules, you have to have 5 sylabals then 7 then 5. I just do free verse.
 
Well, this is free verse.
I wrote it two nights ago with my bandmate in Taco Bell.

Ocean In A Bottle

Oh, he whines he complains
Babe, you're never right.

And I try my hardest to show you love
But this can't happen any more,

Give me three days I'll be fine
Come crawling back to you on the shoreline,

Drowning in the ocean water breathing like my lungs
And I couldn't feel it till you left me

With dayfour in a bottle
Winter on the ocean,

Spring on the horizon
In your eyes.

<3.
 
to my old friend...


I don't appreciate the way you look at me,
The way you glance.
I don't like the way you act like you would like to be,
As if you had a chance.
I don't appreciate the way you make life seemingly bliss,
As if you were ignorant yourself.
I don't like the way you constantly choose me to dismiss,
As if I am a replaceable whelp.
I don't appreciate when you act like you know no weakness,
When you know that the one weakness you've got is myself.
I don't like it when you treat me like a child,
As if I don't know a thing.
I don't appreciate it when you despise my faith,
when you hardly know anything about it.
I didn't like it when you left me standing there with a note soaked of tears in hand,
And now I suppose I will miss you for now and ever.
I miss your smile, and your hand when I was crying.
I miss you now and forever, and I wished I hadn't started to give up.
I pray He got to you before you let go.
Because of you, I'll never stop trying.
 
SoLoved said:
to my old friend...


I don't appreciate the way you look at me,
The way you glance.
I don't like the way you act like you would like to be,
As if you had a chance.
I don't appreciate the way you make life seemingly bliss,
As if you were ignorant yourself.
I don't like the way you constantly choose me to dismiss,
As if I am a replaceable whelp.
I don't appreciate when you act like you know no weakness,
When you know that the one weakness you've got is myself.
I don't like it when you treat me like a child,
As if I don't know a thing.
I don't appreciate it when you despise my faith,
when you hardly know anything about it.
I didn't like it when you left me standing there with a note soaked of tears in hand,
And now I suppose I will miss you for now and ever.
I miss your smile, and your hand when I was crying.
I miss you now and forever, and I wished I hadn't started to give up.
I pray He got to you before you let go.
Because of you, I'll never stop trying.
Click to expand...

WOW! That was very touching. God Bless you Brenna.
 
Chokes leave holes in my thoughts,
Brought down by the very wind that took me there.
Why must it be so?
When it was awhile back,
We had it all.
We had the life.
But the life had not us,
Would not take us in.
Bellowing with great winds it soared
Across the ocean blue like a kite,
Or simply a hawk.
Your hawk.
So graceful it graces upon your lands and waters
Unto your bosom of hope it lands.
Kiting towards the very tower at which you stand,
Looking down on the world,
Looking down on hate,
Looking down on love,
And on me.
I'd rather die.
 
My past calls my name,
It jeers and said I am to blame
Its cruel fingers know no mercy,
My heart sinks in a wretched flame.

I know it calls were true,
Through life&#8217;s choices I blindly flew
With not much thought to their end,
My tears now mingle with the fresh dew.

I look to the ground,
Thinking of the new despair I had found,
With surprise I saw a puddle of blood,
It was not mine so I looked around.

I looked up and saw a cross,
And Man who was tattered with dross
He explained that He had taken my shame,
And that Saten was no longer my boss.

&#8220;You are now a new creature,
Although you have some old features,
I will give you a new name,
Now go into the world and be a teacher&#8221;.

He wiped the tears from my face,
He told me to go to every place,
And tell them what He did,
So I want to tell you of His grace.

See He died to take away your sin,
He died in order that we may be let in,
Let into Heaven where He lives,
No matter where you have been.

 
croton800 said:
My past calls my name,
It jeers and said I am to blame
Its cruel fingers know no mercy,
My heart sinks in a wretched flame.

I know it calls were true,
Through life’s choices I blindly flew
With not much thought to their end,
My tears now mingle with the fresh dew.

I look to the ground,
Thinking of the new despair I had found,
With surprise I saw a puddle of blood,
It was not mine so I looked around.

I looked up and saw a cross,
And Man who was tattered with dross
He explained that He had taken my shame,
And that Saten was no longer my boss.

“You are now a new creature,
Although you have some old features,
I will give you a new name,
Now go into the world and be a teacher”.

He wiped the tears from my face,
He told me to go to every place,
And tell them what He did,
So I want to tell you of His grace.

See He died to take away your sin,
He died in order that we may be let in,
Let into Heaven where He lives,
No matter where you have been.
Click to expand...

WOW! That is AMAZING! Like AWESOME! wow.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Top Bottom
Back