Your message sounds more like a learned repetition of someone who can’t fully rely on the Grace of God.
#1 It’s not scriptural. Reams of scripture ( both OT and NT) support the fact we can not go anywhere that Holy Spirit isn’t . He’s there with us, He’s there before us. His job is to comfort , not to bail out on us.
#2 What kind of loving forgiving nurturing God would support the idea that, ...”you get to take care of you”.
Nonsense !!
Yours is not the message of the cross. The message of the cross brings joy, freedom, life , encouragement and Peace.