Night and Day

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Anthony55

Anthony55

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When darkness comes to rule the night
Shadows dance in the dim moonlight
Of angels or demons I do not know
For Love has taken a piece of my soul
What spell she had on me I cant explain
But on my Heart I carry scars of sorrow and pain
And as I lay my head to sleep
Memories of the past slowly creep
My screams echo throughout the sky
To be written in the realm of time
Of Loves greatest crime
Should I stand and fight, or just walk away
And let her demons have their way
For nothings really as it seems
When you live your life in such a dream
Now night has broken, becomes the day
In my mind she fades away
By Anthony55
 
Seeker47

Seeker47

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You write with beauty and great power. Also it seems, with great sadness. Your images touched me.

Thank you for posting.
 
Anthony55

Anthony55

Active member
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Mar 8, 2021
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Montpelier
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Your very welcome. I forgot a verse
Seeker47 said:
You write with beauty and great power. Also it seems, with great sadness. Your images touched me.

Thank you for posting.
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Your welcome. Thank you so much for your words. I forgot a verse. It would have #9 "And as the night passes by." And so on. LOL
 
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Dayspring

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Very beautiful.

Your poem has clarity as well as sensitivity. I've read it a couple of times: really good.

Hope to read more of your poems!
 
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