Not a bad first post. Don't trust what error says. Your voice is changing. You have strong enough tonal sense that you will have a full man's voice in 3-4 years, and you will be able to record at that point. Your songs have good thoughts, good melody/lyric unison, dynamic melody/rhythm moments, and good song form. I could not understand the words to a couple of the songs, especially "the new has come". I'm no expert in contemporary writing styles, but these sound like good commercial works to me. Is there any church of youth group using them?
I was upset I could not see the lyrics. Is there any chance you would let me take a look at them? I won't steal anything, I promise.