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One night I was sitting on my bed
I was feeling kind of down
thinking about what people have said
they laugh at me as if I were a clown
on the outside I put on a fake smile
on the inside there are many tears
my emotions are starting to pile
I tell my self not to cry
because words supposedly won't hurt me
I wanted so bad to die
my heart cries let me be
my heart screams i can't take it
when will it all stop
my heart is having a fit
as its about to pop

there's a voice in my head
it tells me don't give up, Ime
I will never let you down
I am a friend you can always depend on
I think I'm going insane
I turn the radio to the Edge
the radio changes to 91.7
I change it again
It changes back
I think the radio is possessed
so I turn it off
It turns back on
as song comes on called rescue
as I listen I feel something surrounding me
tears stream down my face
I close my eyes right then
I scream TAKE IT JESUS
I can't do it any more
I can't be independent
I give you my pride
I can't do this alone
I give it all to you
I give you my feelings of loneliness
I give you my feelings of worthlessness
I give you my depression
I give it all to you
IT'S YOURS IT ALL YOURS JESUS
You said your yolk is easy and your burden is light
I believe you
I opened my eyes
nothing glorious happens
I know I will still be depressed at time
teenage life still won't be easy
but I know that night I was set free
I was released from Satan's prison
I AM FREE
I AM FREE
THANK YOU, JESUS, I AM FRE
 
Hi Ime :)

That's such a beautiful piece of work! Thank you so much for sharing it :):) It really struck a chord in me..
 
April09 said:
Hi Ime :)

That's such a beautiful piece of work! Thank you so much for sharing it :):) It really struck a chord in me..
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no problem :) I just want to share it with everyone I have no idea why lol :)
 
Have you written any other poems? Hope you'll be sharing some more of them! ^^ I can't wait to read the next one :D
 
Yes I have written many other poems they are not Christian like this one. I might share them soon :)
 
Hi again, Imepaula ^^

Cool, do share them soon! :D I can't write poems, but I like reading them :P

See you, and God bless!
April09 :)
 
hey i really liked that poem it made me want to cry because it was so touching.
 
awesome, made me think. u've got a real talent there, keep it up. the last bit, 'I AM FREE, I AM FREE' really made me smile, gd job!


:)
 
i liked that so much i sent it 2 my friends and it made my 1 friend cry
 
That was awesome. Are you going to post any more poems? Please do....
 
imepaula said:
ummm...... ok. even though i'm not big on chrisitian music
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I was like that too but about 1 year ago i started really liking it =)

Now i listen to metal, rock, calm & soothing christian music/music about God =)
Im God put it in me to like that music =D
 
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