Here's my input on this....on punctuation....
lol not really. I know why
they're like that though.
It's difficult being a Christian. I mean finding a girl attractive is fine but it can easily go
too far
. I'm going to be taking a long break from all anime soon so I can start going to Church and hopefully get close enough to God
. So, it
doesn't as easily
affect me and I
don't obsess over it and I can spend more time with him instead

.....oh and about the writing please message me more stuff about punctuation and such I could use it lol
On the second sentence, there is a missing verb... in a sense...you needed to write "they're" instead of "there" coz you didn't include the word "are"....so you could either write "there're" or "there are". the apostrophe is there to indicate the joining of words....
The next mistake is pretty much the same...you're supposed to have an apostrophe between the "i" and "s".... like so above....
there are more corrections, so I want you to pay attention to them....
oh my...up there...there was a lot of ands...so i split the sentences....
here is a site that might help a lot....
https://magoosh.com/hs/act/act-english/2017/act-english-punctuation-everything-you-need-to-know/