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Aug 21, 2020
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The abacus of life: weekends and paydays,
Chasing our lives by sprinting the week dazed.
We scan our payslips with an acute aperture,
Yet walk right past an old unflipped calendar.
Watchful with money but spending time liberally,
Only counting its worth when we want a delivery.
Wasting days without mind 'til we get that sign,
But who cares, right…(Has anyone got the time?)

~Poet of Ephraim
 

Seeker47

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Aug 7, 2018
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Wow, is that ever true:
"Only counting it's worth when we want a delivery.
Wasting days without mind 'til we get that sign, "

Getting that sign is our probably our first glimpse of wisdom.

Anyway, great work and BTW welcome back, we missed you for a few days.
 
Aug 21, 2020
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Wow, is that ever true:
"Only counting it's worth when we want a delivery.
Wasting days without mind 'til we get that sign, "

Getting that sign is our probably our first glimpse of wisdom.

Anyway, great work and BTW welcome back, we missed you for a few days.
Thank you @Seeker47

I'm glad it spoke to you and thank you for the warm welcome back! May the Most High continue to bless you.
 

Dayspring

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Really liked this: great job.

It reads so well out loud. Very true and relevant, not to mention timely (I'm reading this on my morning commute!)

This may well become a regular morning reflection for me, so thanks for another very valuable and smashing poem!

Keep up the good work😊!
 
Aug 21, 2020
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@Dayspring , thank you so much for your kind words. They have encouraged me greatly.

When I know a poem has reached someone, as it has you and Seeker, it's a real blessing.

May Yahweh continue to bless you.