Fantastic!!! Not to diminish in the least what you recorded here but imagine what this piece would sound like with a full orchestra. I really think it would adapt to it and put it over the top. Unfortunately it cuts off abruptly at the end and I don't think it is supposed to. I am just listening on my laptops speakers and it sounds great and I'm not going to be modest here but I've got a decent ear for music even though I'm an old man (70).
Hope you keep up the good work and reap some financial blessings with your music if you haven't already. I really like that you have a fair amount of dynamic range in the piece. You might want to check on that abrupt ending. I played it thru 3 times and always ends abruptly at 5:23 Thanks for the nice listen.