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Enunciation could use a little work. You sound bored. Like your mind occasionally wanders during the song, not enough to forget the words you are singing but enough to slur a few words here and there.
I agree with Lynx, remember practice makes perfect. Sing in church, in front of friends, go to coffee houses, anywhere they will let you sing. That makes your voice stronger, helps your confidence, and you will need to reach the backseats so you will learn to use your voice properly, learning to project better.
I like it. I can sense the vibe you're going for but you could use a little more dynamic in the vocals. Like adding a higher vocal part in some parts for emphasis. Or switching up the cadence here and there. If you're using music production software, tuning the vocals slightly can give them a little more polish without taking away the rawness I think you're going for. But I like the theme, the vibe, and the willingness to share what you've created. Keep it up! Looking forward to hearing more.