A sermon I'm working on, please give me feedback!

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It is easy in times of promise and goodness to believe in a loving God but in times of hardship and pain it is an act of defiant courage to believe, Oh My Lord I am a believer help me believe. It is in these times when scars define us that our faith may break the camels back but fear not for you do not suffer alone your God is with you and for every drop you bleed he will bleed also and when all the words run out and the wicked tongues crack dried He will still be a shelter to you from the storm. Our God is a loving God even to those who wrestle with doubt; He will cast off your shackles if you allow Him to do so. Oh My Lord I am a believer help me believe.
When your cross is too much to bear He will help you carry it and He is stronger then you can imagine, do not give up hope oh Children for your Father is with you now and at all times until the hour of death when you return to the love from whence you came. For you The Word became flesh and for you Jesus Christ was tried, tortured and killed, fear not for your God is a God that bleeds alongside you and catches every tear you have wept in the palm of His hand. Oh My Lord I am a believer help me believe.
 
Ok, I see the sermon. Where there is the sentence about a camels back. It should be camel's back. What do you mean by wicked tongues crack dried. Also you need to have a comma after dried. As for any other errors, I see no others that I can see. God bless and hope the sermon will be edifying to the believers.
 
Thanks for the input, and it's a phrase in the UK it means the end of deceit and talking negatively about people
 
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