“Ode to Annabelle lee “

t’was a long long time ago, By a sea called Galilee . That a man there preached truly , by the gospel ye know , who died for you and me


And this man had lived , with no other thought , Than to love and be loved by thee .When I was a child , I thought as a child, Bout this man from Galilee


How he loved with a love that was more than love, when he died for us , hanged on the tree

. With a love that the wingèd angels in Heaven, witnessed, thats given to we
.this Love was the reason that once long ago, Through This king from Galilee

who’s blood was then given , so we could keep livin ‘ through his body from galilee
And A wind blew from heaven , and quickened inside us , the spirit of life life that sets free .

So now us sinners are turned into saints . Redeeming our Faith that shall be
Through one empty sepulcher , filled with the life , of the son from Galilee


His angels, rejoicing , so often in heaven.For one who repents among we
Yea! that was the calling as all men know, Of the Lord from Galilee


Now His breath cames from heaven , that spirit from God , hes opened our eyes now we see
And his love it is stronger by far than the love , Of those who are like you and me

And even more worthy than we

That neither the angels in Heaven aboveNor demons down beneath the sea . Can ever dissever our souls from the love, of our God who once walked Galilee


For the moon never shines , without bringing me rhymes Of his beautiful face we shall see . And the stars never rise, but I feel the pure eyes , Of the lord who is watching ‘ore me

And so each night passes , I lie down in rest . And I thank you Lord Jesus , I’ll give you my best .

I thank you Lord Jesus for back in that day , the time when your light shined and walked Galilee

To tell of your kingdom by the sea , down by the sounding sea , when the light shined from Galilee


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“Nevertheless the dimness shall not be such as was in her vexation, when at the first he lightly afflicted the land of Zebulun and the land of Naphtali, and afterward did more grievously afflict her by the way of the sea, beyond Jordan, in Galilee of the nations. The people that walked in darkness have seen a great light: they that dwell in the land of the shadow of death, upon them hath the light shined.

For unto us a child is born, unto us a son is given: and the government shall be upon his shoulder: and his name shall be called Wonderful, Counsellor, The mighty God, The everlasting Father, The Prince of Peace. Of the increase of his government and peace there shall be no end, upon the throne of David, and upon his kingdom, to order it, and to establish it with judgment and with justice from henceforth even for ever. The zeal of the LORD of hosts will perform this. The Lord sent a word into Jacob, and it hath lighted upon Israel.”
‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭9:1-2, 6-8‬ ‭KJV‬‬

I had to fix it I apologize

“ t’was a long long time ago, By a sea called Galilee .

That a man there preached truly , by the gospel ye know , who died for you and me

And this man had lived , with no other thought , Than to love and be loved by thee .

When I was a child , I thought as a child, Bout this man from Galilee

How he loved with a love that was more than love, when he died for us , hanged on the tree

With a love that the wingèd angels in Heaven, witnessed, thats given to we

this Love was the reason that once long ago, Through This king from Galilee

His blood was then given , so we could start livin ‘ , in his body sent from galilee

And A wind blew from heaven , and quickened inside us , the spirit of life life that sets free .

So now us sinners are turned into saints . Redeeming our Faith that shall be

Through one empty sepulcher , filled with the life ,
of the son from Galilee


His angels, rejoicing , so often in heaven.
For one who repents among we

Yea! that was the calling as all men know, Of the Lord from Galilee


His breath came from heaven , that spirit from God , hes opened our eyes so we see

That his love it is stronger by far than the love , Of those who are like you and me, And even more worthy than we


That neither the angels in Heaven aboveNor demons down beneath the sea .Can ever dissever our souls from the love, of our God who once walked Galilee


And the moon never shines , without bringing us rhymes Of his beautiful face we shall see .

And the stars never rise, but I know the pure eyes , Of the lord always watch ‘ore me

And so each night passes , I lie down in rest . And I thank you Lord Jesus , for passing the test

I thank you Lord Jesus for back in that day , the time when your light shined and walked Galilee

To tell of your kingdom preached forth from that day

the kingdom by the sea , down by the sounding sea ,

the day the light shined , as a sword that unbinds , by your word from Galilee”

Ah! Another masterpiece! You had me from the first line.

Ha ! A mock of someones masterpiece anyways

Perhaps Poe’s mind wouldn‘t have been so tortured if his thoughts had turned to his Savior rather than Annabel Lee. It was his last completed poem. The theme of both your poem and Poe’s is everlasting love; I would say yours is the greater success!

well I sure can’t express how wonderful that makes me feel and encourages me to share in the future some other things

a truly I remember lately alot from my youth I had to do a report on a famous author and chose him , those Ruthyms and structures and Melodie’s always stuck in my head Sonora really just remembering his melody and changing the message

It’s just fun I think and I have way too
Much time lately and need to keep my thinking off of things in life so it helps

Yes, you definitely have a way with words—and you were given that precious gift for a reason…. Most likely, many reasons. Maybe your sister would enjoy hearing you read one of your poems to her. (Still praying for her and for your family.)

Yes please do keep her in your prayers she really needs it I was visiting today with her tkalkin bout ole times . Still is wuote uncomfortable but has good spirit