In an age where people In a daze stare

In a world gone foul with brutal deeds, When mankind will only think of themselves and greed. And they shall walk as if asleep they do not look as history weeps and crystal glass is before their face, their eyes becoming a blinded disgrace, As hearts harden with never ending temptations watching Sin, the Light of God in Mankind weakens and grows dims. Fools lead, the minions sway, lost identity marks the way. Little Truths, Confusion and Pride, so many diversions will arrive. In an age where people In a daze stare and the things of importance treated as if not there. Their minds and beings are far off in a dream. And facing Reality becomes harder when they can’t take their eyes off the screen. Diversion of attention, A.D.D. Can’t concentrate long enough to see what I mean.
I looked and though for a moment what could I do, my face and self getting clearer my eyes unblinded with the Lords truth. What difference could I make? What chords would ring a bell, what would it take for people to believe that they can change from the path of Fate with reality becoming Hell?
'Try' is a word that can never be defeated, and if you do try you can say, that you made use of this in time, before the shame of Judgement Day. Not understanding this or being too busy is so easy to become the lie. I didn't think I could make a difference........so just like others I didn't even 'try'.
What you do with your time in the effort of this word is better than guilt, shame and scorn, so that if you are a good caretaker of your life and time, and faithful to the Lord you can be reborn.

Mychael

this is the second poem of yours I’ve read and I love your gift.

Just a little help though for one poet to another...

its easier to follow the cadence of your rhyming if you place it as such..



In a world gone foul with brutal deeds,
Mankind thinking of self and only greed.
walking as if asleep...
Not seeing that history weeps.

Your writings are really great.....just a bit hard to read is all. Not criticizing for harm. I hope you understand that. 🥰

Never wrote apoem in my life until Dec.2019. "Try is a word that can only be beaten if you don't" is a motto I try to follow that my Father taught me. Any help is always honored, and God Bless you for reaching out. The Lord sometimes utilises my skills in ways others don't or won't, perhaps your awareness is similar. In todays world with so many distractions and temptations, who is telling the truth? Teach me more if it would help me to reach others when they need it most, i will try to be an empty cup.

I like them as well. Sometimes you just have to write what comes to you at that moment.