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Dude653

Dude653

Senior Member
#1
Mar 19, 2011
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Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?
 
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Jennie-Mae

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#2
Dude653 said:
Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?
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I really liked this one.
 
BillG

BillG

Senior Member
#3
Feb 15, 2017
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Dude653 said:
Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?
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Beautiful and from the heart.
A heart that God will not reject.
 
student

student

Senior Member
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Jul 20, 2010
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Nice. Very much from the heart.. I almost want to ask if all is well in your spiritual world... Very good work. -student
 
student

student

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Jul 20, 2010
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#5
Would it be alright if I shared this?
 
Dan_473

Dan_473

Senior Member
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Mar 11, 2014
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I think you put into words what a lot of people think but are afraid to say.

It reminded me of the Psalms.
 
Seeker47

Seeker47

Well-known member
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Aug 7, 2018
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Well done! Those who have had torments tearing at their chest while wondering about the purpose can really relate to what you have written.
 
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oldethennew

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Feb 28, 2016
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a beautiful poem!
and because of how you have expressed yourself to your Saviour,
He will increase your Faith and address all your doubts and fears...
GBY...
 
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Pumpkinspice

Well-known member
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Sep 22, 2018
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Dude653 said:
Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?
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I like the birds and the toil very good
 
DarthStav

DarthStav

Member
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Sep 24, 2018
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Dude653 said:
Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?
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"Talking to the ceiling" Indeed.
 
becc

becc

Senior Member
#13
Mar 4, 2018
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Dude653 said:
Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?
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I loved this soooooo much, God bless you
 
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