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I posted this in another thread. Probably won't hurt to post it here as well: -
All pretensions gone away Not much left that could stay Only I and the masks of my many faces In life's theatre removed from its stages... -
In the gentle heart of Capernaum I was raised God-fearing parents caring for every need In synagogue where the Lord was praised It was... -
All pretensions gone away Not much left that could stay Only I and the masks of my many faces In life's theatre removed from its stages...
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In the gentle heart of Capernaum I was raised God-fearing parents caring for every need In synagogue where the Lord was praised It was... -
As is probably evident enough, this is based on the Gospel accounts of Jesus raising the daughter of Jairus from the dead. One could...
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Thanks for the positive feedback, ebdesroches and Moses_Young. I wasn't quite as sure about this one as some of my other poems. I...
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In the gentle heart of Capernaum I was raised God-fearing parents caring for every need In synagogue where the Lord was praised It was... -
As is probably evident enough, this is based on the Gospel accounts of Jesus raising the daughter of Jairus from the dead. One could...
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Eternity turned to dust in a flare Seared conscience looking for lost remorse A broken man and his nightmare Chased and badly beaten by...
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The human face of God Sweating drops of blood Into flame of judgement bound Baking redemption's bread The vicarious divine rescue... -
The human face of God Sweating drops of blood Into flame of judgement bound Baking redemption's bread The vicarious divine rescue... -
The human face of God Sweating drops of blood Into flame of judgement bound Baking redemption's bread The vicarious divine rescue... -
The human face of God Sweating drops of blood Into flame of judgement bound Baking redemption's bread The vicarious divine rescue...
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I studied to be a veterinarian just to meet chicks. To maximize my chances, I specialized in avian pediatrics. Then I switched careers... -
These would work. Would just have to also change lines 7 and 8 to make them rhyme. Perhaps I'll write an alternative version with these...
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I studied to be a veterinarian just to meet chicks. To maximize my chances, I specialized in avian pediatrics. Then I switched careers... -
I studied to be a veterinarian just to meet chicks. To maximize my chances, I specialized in avian pediatrics. Then I switched careers...
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I studied to be a veterinarian just to meet chicks. To maximize my chances, I specialized in avian pediatrics. Then I switched careers... -
The structure of it is supposed to be first AABC AABC and then switch to ABCD ABCD, although I break my own rule by not making the 9th...
