Would it make you question whether the election spoken of here was according to the word order of the language, speaking of their being, "elect/chosen sojourners/strangers/temporary residents of/for dispersion...as the ESV is picking up? IOW Jewish Christians chosen to live as strangers in the diaspora?
ESV 1 Peter 1:1 Peter, an apostle of Jesus Christ, To those who are elect exiles of the Dispersion in Pontus, Galatia, Cappadocia, Asia, and Bithynia,
Not sure that I understand your point entirely, but if I do, not really. However, I think I see how you came to that conclusion based upon 1 Peter 1:1. However, to understand who actually is in view in 1:1, it is important to consider 1Peter 2:9 -10 too. Old categorizations/labels such as Jew and Gentile as used in the OC earthly context, lost significance through Christ. The elect, regardless of human linage, became the people of God by being chosen/elected by God. In 1 Peter 2:9-10 (below), Peter emphasizes their new spiritual linage and relationship with God through Christ - that they have become a completely new people. Paul in Galatians 3:27 -29 essentially tells us the same thing.
[1Pe 1:1 ESV]
1 Peter, an apostle of Jesus Christ, To those who are elect exiles of the Dispersion in Pontus, Galatia, Cappadocia, Asia, and Bithynia,
[1Pe 1:1 KJV]
1 Peter, an apostle of Jesus Christ, to the strangers scattered throughout Pontus, Galatia, Cappadocia, Asia, and Bithynia,
[1Pe 2:9-10 ESV]
9 But you are a chosen race, a royal priesthood, a holy nation,
a people for his own possession, that you may proclaim the excellencies
of him who called you out of darkness into his marvelous light.
10
Once you were not a people, but now you are God's people; once you had not received mercy, but now you have received mercy.
[1Pe 2:9-10 KJV]
9 But ye [are] a chosen generation, a royal priesthood, an holy nation,
a peculiar people; that ye should shew forth the praises of
him who hath called you out of darkness into his marvellous light:
10
Which in time past [were] not a people, but [are] now the people of God: which had not obtained mercy, but now have obtained mercy.
[Gal 3:28-29 ESV]
28 T
here is neither Jew nor Greek, there is neither slave nor free, there is no male and female, for you are all one in Christ Jesus.
29 And if you are Christ's, then you are Abraham's offspring, heirs according to promise.
[Gal 3:28-29 KJV]
28
There is neither Jew nor Greek, there is neither bond nor free, there is neither male nor female: for ye are all one in Christ Jesus.
29
And if ye [be] Christ's, then are ye Abraham's seed, and heirs according to the promise.